Walk the reader through four opening techniques that examiners reward: action openings, dialogue openings, setting-first openings, and in-media-res openings. For each technique, show a weak version and a polished version side by side. Include a five-step mini exercise at the end where the student rewrites their own opening using one of the four methods. Keep the tone encouraging, like a favourite English teacher who genuinely believes every child can improve. Use short paragraphs and real student-style examples, not literary novel extracts.

7 min readIntermediate

Using Figurative Language Effectively in 11+ Creative Writing

Explain simile, metaphor, personification, and hyperbole with examples written at Year 5/6 reading level. Show how overusing figurative language weakens writing just as much as underusing it. Include a "before and after" paragraph where plain prose is transformed with well-placed figurative language. Offer a practical rule: aim for two or three figurative devices per page, placed at moments of high emotion or vivid description. End with a quick self-check list students can use before handing in their exam paper.

7 min readIntermediate

Writing Effective Dialogue in 11+ Stories

Teach students how to write dialogue that sounds natural and reveals character. Cover punctuation rules (speech marks, new speaker new line, comma before closing speech marks) alongside craft skills (using dialogue to show personality, advance the plot, create tension). Provide three examples of the same conversation written poorly and well. Show how dialogue tags beyond "said" should be used sparingly and only when they add meaning. Include a rewriting exercise where students improve a flat conversation.

7 min readIntermediate

How to Write a Satisfying Ending for Your 11+ Story

Address the most common problem in timed creative writing: rushed or missing endings. Explain four ending types that examiners reward: the circular ending (echoing the opening), the reflection ending (character learns something), the twist ending (surprising but logical), and the quiet ending (moment of calm after action). For each, provide a short example. Offer a time-management tip: leave the last five minutes specifically for your ending. Include a practice exercise where students write three different endings for the same story.

7 min readIntermediate

Using the Rule of Three in 11+ Creative Writing

Explain the rule of three: ideas, descriptions, and actions presented in groups of three are more satisfying and memorable. Show how it works in different contexts: three adjectives in a description, three events in a plot, three items in a list. Provide examples from well-known stories and original writing. Discuss when to break the rule for effect. Include before-and-after paragraph comparisons showing writing with and without the rule of three applied.

7 min readIntermediate

Building Tension and Suspense in 11+ Story Writing

Teach five specific techniques for building tension: short sentences, unanswered questions, slowing down time with detail, withholding information from the reader, and using the senses to create unease. For each technique, provide a clear example and explain the mechanism: why does a short sentence feel tense? Because it mirrors the sharp, rapid thoughts of a frightened character. Include a model passage that builds from calm to tense, annotated to show which techniques are used where. Close with a practice exercise.

8 min readIntermediate

Writing Flashbacks Effectively in 11+ Stories

How to weave a flashback into a short story without confusing the reader — signals, transitions, common pitfalls, and a rewriting exercise.

9 min readIntermediate

Using Symbolism in 11+ Creative Writing

What symbolism is, how it works in short stories, the difference between natural and forced symbolism, and a writing exercise.

9 min readIntermediate

Writing Twist Endings That Actually Work

The craft behind a satisfying twist — three types, the requirement to plant hints, and a planning template for 11+ stories.

9 min readIntermediate

Using Repetition for Emphasis in 11+ Writing

How deliberate repetition — anaphora, epistrophe, key-word repetition — creates rhythm and emphasis in creative writing and speeches.

8 min readIntermediate

10 Adventure Story Starters for 11+ Practice

Exciting adventure story starters to help 11+ students practise planning and writing engaging narratives.

5 min readBeginner

10 Mystery Story Starters for 11+ Creative Writing Practice

Provide ten original mystery story prompts that a Year 5 or 6 child could use for timed writing practice. Each prompt should include a one-sentence setup, a "what if" twist, and a suggested emotion to explore. After the prompts, include guidance on how to build suspense in a mystery: short sentences, unanswered questions, sensory clues. Write in a warm, direct voice. Avoid bullet-heavy formatting; use flowing paragraphs with subheadings that feel like natural conversation.

7 min readBeginner

10 Descriptive Writing Prompts for 11+ Exam Practice

Provide ten original descriptive writing prompts focused on settings and atmospheres rather than stories. Each prompt should specify a location, a time of day, and a mood to capture. After the prompts, include guidance on how descriptive writing differs from narrative: there is no plot, no character development needed, just vivid sensory immersion. Explain how to structure a descriptive piece: open with the dominant sense, layer in details, build to a final image or feeling. Write in a supportive voice that treats descriptive writing as a skill worth mastering.

7 min readBeginner

10 Character-Based Story Prompts for 11+ Writing

Offer ten prompts centred around interesting characters rather than situations. Each prompt introduces a character with a distinctive trait or dilemma: the girl who collects broken things, the boy who speaks only in questions, the grandmother with a secret room. After the prompts, discuss how to develop a character quickly in a short exam piece: give them one strong want, one obstacle, and one surprising detail. Include tips on revealing character through action and dialogue rather than description blocks.

7 min readBeginner

10 Emotional Story Prompts for 11+ Writing Practice

Provide ten prompts designed to elicit strong emotional writing: a child's first day at a new school, saying goodbye to a beloved pet, winning something unexpected, being lost in an unfamiliar place, discovering a family secret. Each prompt should include the emotion to explore and a "way in" to the story. After the prompts, discuss how to write about emotions authentically: avoid naming the feeling directly, show it through physical sensations and actions. Include a model paragraph demonstrating emotional writing done well.

7 min readBeginner

10 Historical Fiction Story Prompts for the 11+

Ten story prompts set in periods Year 5/6 students know from school, with guidance on writing convincingly about the past.

9 min readIntermediate

10 Fantasy and Magic Story Prompts for the 11+

Ten original fantasy prompts for 11+ practice — classical fantasy, urban fantasy, and magical realism — with guidance on rules, specificity, and avoiding clichés.

9 min readBeginner

Using the Five Senses in 11+ Descriptive Writing

How to incorporate all five senses into your descriptive writing to create immersive scenes for 11+ exams.

6 min readIntermediate

Writing Vivid Settings That Score Top Marks in the 11+

Teach students how to bring a setting to life using layered sensory detail. Cover the difference between "listing" senses and weaving them into action. Provide three worked examples: a forest scene, a busy market, and a stormy coastline. For each, show a basic version and an improved version with annotations explaining what changed and why. Include tips on using weather, light, and sound to create atmosphere. Close with a five-minute timed exercise where students describe a room from memory.

8 min readIntermediate

Creating Atmosphere and Mood in 11+ Descriptive Writing

Explain how word choice, sentence length, and pacing work together to create a specific mood. Cover four moods commonly tested: tension, joy, sadness, and wonder. For each mood, provide a short example passage and highlight the techniques used. Discuss how colour, temperature, and texture words contribute to atmosphere. Include a practical exercise where the student writes the same scene twice with two different moods. Keep language accessible and examples relatable to children aged 10 to 11.

8 min readIntermediate

Describing Characters That Examiners Remember

Teach students how to introduce a character in a way that makes them feel real and distinctive. Cover: choosing one or two defining physical details (not a head-to-toe inventory), revealing personality through action and dialogue rather than adjective lists, using a character's relationship with their environment to show who they are. Provide three example character introductions at different quality levels and discuss what makes the best one effective. Include an exercise where students write a 100-word character introduction using the techniques taught.

7 min readIntermediate

Describing Weather and Seasons in 11+ Writing

Vocabulary banks and techniques for describing all four seasons, with model paragraphs and a writing exercise using pathetic fallacy.

10 min readIntermediate

Describing Action Scenes Without Losing the Reader

Structural rules for writing chase, fight, and rescue scenes — sentence length, concrete verbs, clarity, and a before-and-after comparison.

9 min readIntermediate

The Self-Editing Checklist Every 11+ Student Needs

Give students a practical checklist they can memorise and apply in the last minutes of any timed writing task. Organise it into three levels: surface (spelling, punctuation, capital letters), structural (paragraphs, opening, ending), and craft (show not tell, varied sentences, figurative language). For each checkpoint, provide a specific question to ask: "Have I used at least two different sentence openers in each paragraph?" Explain that self-editing is a skill that improves with practice, not a talent. Include a sample marked-up paragraph showing edits in action.

7 min readIntermediate

7 Common Writing Mistakes 11+ Students Make (and How to Fix Them)

Identify the seven most frequent errors that cost marks in 11+ creative writing based on common examiner feedback: tense inconsistency, comma splices, starting every sentence with "I" or "The", telling instead of showing, no paragraphs, weak endings, and overuse of exclamation marks. For each mistake, show a real-looking example, explain why it loses marks, and provide a corrected version. Keep the tone constructive: every mistake on this list is fixable with awareness and practice.

8 min readIntermediate

Upgrading Your First Draft: A Revision Guide for 11+ Writers

Take a deliberately mediocre first draft and walk through the process of improving it. Show five revision passes: replacing vague words with precise ones, adding sensory detail, varying sentence structure, strengthening the opening and ending, and checking technical accuracy. At each stage, show the text before and after the revision. Explain that first drafts are supposed to be imperfect; the skill is in knowing how to improve them. Include a "revision checklist" students can use on their own work.

8 min readIntermediate

Writing a Formal Letter for the 11+ Exam

How to structure a formal letter for the 11+ exam — layout, register, purpose paragraphs, and a model letter with annotations.

9 min readIntermediate

Writing a Diary Entry for the 11+ Exam

The conventions of diary writing for the 11+ — date, first person, voice, reflection, and how diary entries differ from stories.

9 min readIntermediate

Writing a Balanced Argument for the 11+

How to plan and write a discursive essay for the 11+ — structure, connectives, model essay, and a planning template.

10 min readIntermediate

Writing a Persuasive Speech for the 11+

Structure, persuasive toolkit, model speech with annotations, and a self-editing checklist for 11+ persuasive writing tasks.

10 min readIntermediate

Writing a Newspaper Article for the 11+

Structure, register, model article, and practice prompt for writing newspaper articles in 11+ and independent school exams.

9 min readIntermediate

Writing a Book Review for the 11+

The book review structure for 11+ exams — plot summary, character analysis, theme, personal opinion, and the most common mistake to avoid.

9 min readIntermediate

Understanding Poetry for the 11+

The building blocks of poetry — line, stanza, rhyme scheme, rhythm, imagery, tone — and how to read a poem slowly and confidently.

10 min readIntermediate

Writing a Poem for the 11+ Exam

A guide to writing your own poetry for the 11+ — free verse, acrostic, and narrative forms, plus techniques for imagery and precise word choice.

9 min readIntermediate

Tackling Unseen Poetry in 11+ Comprehension

A four-step approach to unseen poetry in comprehension papers, with model questions and answers at different quality bands.

10 min readIntermediate

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